KHWAAB CHHOTE THE NIGAAHOn ME PALNE LAGE,
MANZIL DOOR THI FIR BHI HUM CHALNE LAGE..!!
EHSAAS MERE DARD KA UNKO TAB JAKAR HUA,
ASHQ MERI AANKHOn SE JAB BAAHAR NIKALNE LAGE..!!
WO KHAAK HO GAYE KUCHH BHI BAN-NE SE PAHLE,
DEKH KAR AUROn KO JO BHI THE JALNE LAGE..!!
TOOT-TA HAI AAKHIR EK DIN AISA DIL AKSAR YAHAAn,
KISI KI IK MUSKAAN PAR HI JO FISALNE LAGE..!!
HAATH DEKAR USE BHI UTHA LENA TUM,
GIRKAR BHI AGAR KOI JO SAMBHALNE LAGE..!!
DARD BHARKAR LIKH DE, “GOPAL” TU AISI GAZAL,
SUNKE JISE PATTHAR KA DIL BHI PIGHALNE LAGE..!!
--GOPAL K.
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खुश रहो एहले चमन हम तो तुम्हे छोड़ चले
हाथों में गोपाल के अपना मुक्कदर छोड़ चले
फक्र हमे उस पे और उसकी नज़मो पे
हम तो अपना कलाम गंगा में डुबोने चले
wow bhai bohot hi achi ghazal hai mujhe bohot hi achi lagi dost
Mera dard dekhar un ki rooh machalne lagi
BADIA
kya baat hai mujhe to aapki style bhi pasand aayi
gazal bhaut pasand aayi
likhte rahe
kaise karte ho ye coding bhi batana
bahut khub mitr khub likho
KHWAAB CHHOTE THE NIGAAHOn ME PALNE LAGE,
MANZIL DOOR THI FIR BHI HUM CHALNE LAGE..!!
छोटे-छोटे ख्वाब ही जीने की दिशा देते हैं,मंजिल भी करीब आ
जाती है हौसले को देखकर........
kaun na pighal jaye bhai,itni pyaari ghazal ko padhkar !
AAP SABKA TAHE DIL SE SHUKRIYA
As usual, your gazal is WONDERFUL !!
But aapse is se zyada ummeedein hai humein...
Likhte rahiye....and keep posting...
SHUKRIYA YOGI, PURI KOSHISH KARUNGA KI AUR BEHTAR LIKHU
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