Tuesday, August 5, 2008

PALNE LAGE


KHWAAB CHHOTE THE NIGAAHOn ME PALNE LAGE,
MANZIL DOOR THI FIR BHI HUM CHALNE LAGE..!!

EHSAAS MERE DARD KA UNKO TAB JAKAR HUA,
ASHQ MERI AANKHOn SE JAB BAAHAR NIKALNE LAGE..!!

WO KHAAK HO GAYE KUCHH BHI BAN-NE SE PAHLE,
DEKH KAR AUROn KO JO BHI THE JALNE LAGE..!!

TOOT-TA HAI AAKHIR EK DIN AISA DIL AKSAR YAHAAn,
KISI KI IK MUSKAAN PAR HI JO FISALNE LAGE..!!

HAATH DEKAR USE BHI UTHA LENA TUM,
GIRKAR BHI AGAR KOI JO SAMBHALNE LAGE..!!

DARD BHARKAR LIKH DE, “GOPAL” TU AISI GAZAL,
SUNKE JISE PATTHAR KA DIL BHI PIGHALNE LAGE..!!


--GOPAL K.

9 comments:

डॉ. श्रीकृष्ण मित्तल said...

खुश रहो एहले चमन हम तो तुम्हे छोड़ चले
हाथों में गोपाल के अपना मुक्कदर छोड़ चले

फक्र हमे उस पे और उसकी नज़मो पे
हम तो अपना कलाम गंगा में डुबोने चले

WISHALI said...

wow bhai bohot hi achi ghazal hai mujhe bohot hi achi lagi dost
Mera dard dekhar un ki rooh machalne lagi

bablu said...

BADIA

श्रद्धा जैन said...

kya baat hai mujhe to aapki style bhi pasand aayi

gazal bhaut pasand aayi
likhte rahe


kaise karte ho ye coding bhi batana

Akshaya-mann said...

bahut khub mitr khub likho

रश्मि प्रभा said...

KHWAAB CHHOTE THE NIGAAHOn ME PALNE LAGE,
MANZIL DOOR THI FIR BHI HUM CHALNE LAGE..!!
छोटे-छोटे ख्वाब ही जीने की दिशा देते हैं,मंजिल भी करीब आ
जाती है हौसले को देखकर........
kaun na pighal jaye bhai,itni pyaari ghazal ko padhkar !

GOPAL K.. MAI SHAYAR TO NAHI... said...

AAP SABKA TAHE DIL SE SHUKRIYA

Yogesh said...

As usual, your gazal is WONDERFUL !!

But aapse is se zyada ummeedein hai humein...
Likhte rahiye....and keep posting...

GOPAL K.. MAI SHAYAR TO NAHI... said...

SHUKRIYA YOGI, PURI KOSHISH KARUNGA KI AUR BEHTAR LIKHU

YE MAI HU-- GOPAL

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